OOTP Chapter Five: "The Order of the Phoenix"

[for-diddled.livejournal.com]

* Thought I should perhaps point out that by this point in COS we were at Hogwarts. Ah, the days when the Potter books were reasonably well-paced…

 

* Apparently they’ve been trying to remove Sirius’ mother for a month. IOW, someone annoys you, you kick them out of the house. What a charming group of people.

* Yes, Ginny, let’s all laugh at the unkempt, drunken petty criminal. What a hilarious man!

* Also, given Mundungus’ proven unreliability, why do they let him join the Order or attend meetings?

* Yes, JKR, Tonks is clumsy, we get it. You don’t need to show her knocking over chairs every time she does something. Less is more, remember, and doesn’t make us want to strangle the character every time we see her.

* So why exactly is Sirius getting so angsty about staying at No. 12, again? This is the man who’s been incarcerated in an impregnable island fortress for twelve years, surrounded by an army of depression-inducing monsters, whilst staying sane enough to escape and evade the biggest manhunt in recent wizarding history for almost a year. How is his current situation worse than that?

* Although come to think of it he didn’t have Ginny with him then. Canonical proof that Ginny Mk. 2 is officially more depressing than a Dementor? :p

* I know Sirius doesn’t like his family, but distastefully surveying his antique silverware like that just makes him look really spoilt. Most people would be glad to own something so valuable, but I suppose we can’t have Sirius counting his blessings, otherwise he wouldn’t be able to angst all the time and make Harry feel all miserable.

* Let’s all laugh at the Twins and their reckless use of magic! That’ll really do their behaviour a whole world of good.

* So how are magical pests any different to Muggle pests? Do they only live in places with high concentrations of magic? But then, surely they wouldn’t have enough habitat to survive, and would pretty soon go extinct? Or are they just like normal pests, only magical, in which case how come Muggles haven’t discovered them yet?

* I’m glad that the goblins did, by and large, decide to stay out of the war. If were in the books, I’d want my species to stay as far away as possible from these violent, stupid, permanently infantilised people. Whilst embezzling all the gold they left in my bank, of course. ;-)

* As if to prove my point, the Weasley children are all howling with laughter at Mundungus’ rather unfunny story.

* Remember when I asked why they let Mundungus be part of the Order? Turns out he’s loyal to Dumbledore. Silly me for not guessing that.

* Let’s be reminded of how overweight Dudley is. Unlike Harry, who can eat three helpings of dessert at every meal and not get fat.

* Note how Sirius had to stick his oar in and ruin the atmosphere. His maturity level’s really dropped in this book. Maybe killing him off was the kindest thing to do, as it stopped him becoming even worse later on in the series.

* And now the adults are all arguing in front of the kids. After all, it’s not like that’ll undermine their authority or anything.

* “Harry felt sure that Lupin, at least, knew that some Extendable Ears had survived Mrs. Weasley’s purge.” And did nothing about it. How depressingly IC.

* Ginny’s raging clearly proves that she’s a tough, independent, strong girl, fully the equal to the Chosen One. As opposed to, say, an immature, whiny brat, who throws a tantrum every time she doesn’t get what she wants.

* “‘Dumbledore’s got a shrewd idea,’ said Lupin, ‘and Dumbledore’s shrewd ideas normally turn out to be accurate.’” Aargh, this Dumbledore sycophancy, it’s too much! Why can’t I be reading a sensible series, with characters who can think for themselves? Heck, I’d even prefer to be reading My Immortal than this.

* BTW, why does nobody wonder where Dumbledore gets his information about Voldemort from? Very suspicious, if you ask me…

* “Fudge thinks Dumbledore is plotting to overthrow him.” Knowing our Dumbles, it wouldn’t surprise me in the slightest to learn that he was plotting to overthrow the Minister, and replace him with someone who’ll do what he, Dumbledore, says – for the greater good, of course…

* Fudge has become more confident in the exercise of his power. Which is a bad thing. Everyone should stay tied to Dumbledore’s apron strings for all their life!

* Still, this chapter makes the whole war sound so exciting and underhand. A pity it turned out to be such a disappointment, really.

 

Comments

[ladyhadhafang.livejournal.com]

Great update. :)

Can we not refer to this Ginny as Ginny from now on? Even Ginny MK 2 sounds too Ginny-ish. How about "LBCA" (or Low Budget Crazula?). Probably a little clunky, though. :(

To be fair regarding Sirius' mother, imagine if you were trying to read and she kept wailing at you. Or if someone rang the doorbell and she started screeching about "Mudbloods", etc. People would probably wonder what was wrong with you. ;-) (That said, you'd think that Sirius would have worked out his grudge with his mum... :/)

That actually kind of bothered me: how *is* Harry able to eat so much food but still stay skinny? Did he just inherit a really, really quick metabolism? *Shrugs*

And yes, to sum up, these "heroes" have issues. 'Nuff said. :(

Again, great update. :)

[mmmarcusz.livejournal.com]

That actually kind of bothered me: how *is* Harry able to eat so much food but still stay skinny? Did he just inherit a really, really quick metabolism? *Shrugs*

He does play a lot of sport, and walking around the ridiculously oversized castle (There are 12 subjects, and Herbology, Care of Magical Creatures and Astronomy are not taught in classrooms - so they have about seven storeys housing nine classrooms?) would take weight off you.

Also, it's odd that magic can replace the bones in his arm, but not correct his eyesight? Muggles even have laser eye treatment.

[ladyhadhafang.livejournal.com]

Actually now that you mention it, god*damn* is Hogwarts big. (I know it sounds obvious, but I didn't exactly realize how *big* it actually was...)

(Please excuse my naivetie for a moment. ;-)

And that's a very good question regarding laser eye treatment. Maybe Harry's not old enough to have it? Or, knowing Harry, he probably doesn't care. "I yam what I yam"...or whatever. :/

[charlottehywd.livejournal.com]

Actually, Hogwarts seems much bigger than it needs to be for the number of students that attend it.

[sharaz-jek.livejournal.com]

He does play a lot of sport

Quidditch doesn't seem to provide much physical exertion though (except possibly for the Beaters).

[fishinginthemud.livejournal.com]

Those glasses make up 99 percent of his characterization. All fanfic versions of Harry Potter have glasses and a scar, even if they have nothing else in common with the canon version.

[ladyhadhafang.livejournal.com]

True. :)

Yes

[urbanman1984.livejournal.com]

Glasses do lend character to someone - even someone who has no character whatsoever to start out with.

[charlottehywd.livejournal.com]

Those glasses make up 99 percent of his characterization.


That's simultaneously sad and very, very true.

[oryx_leucoryx]

There was that Snarry where Harry ends up with no scar, no glasses and non-green eyes after Severus uses illegal means to heal Harry from mutilation by Bellatrix.

[sunnyskywalker]

There's also The Best Revenge, where Snape takes Harry to get wizarding contacts.

[jodel-from-aol.livejournal.com]

Ginny Mk2 = Bellatrix Parva.