[identity profile] ladyhadhafang.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] deathtocapslock

Am I the only one a little bothered by Dumbledore? Not only with the fact he could end up in the Guinness Book Of World Records for "Most Incompetent Headmaster of All Time" (though I'm sure there's worse. :P), but also because...he just bugs me. I know JKR was trying to write him as the "flawed Yoda", so to speak (and to be fair, he's nowhere near Yoda. XD), but it's also how...preachy he gets. Towards Fudge, for example. You know, in Goblet of Fire, with, "You place too much importance on purity of blood, yadda yadda et cetera et cetera" -- which considering how he treated Tom Riddle and the Slytherins is...slightly hypocritical isn't it? Probably bad writing on JKR's part, though. :/

Anyways, sorry 'bout the rambling. Thoughts?

Date: 2011-03-05 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charlottehywd.livejournal.com
I mean at least Jesus really died, rather than living through some convoluted scheme because God couldn't bear to kill him off..

Date: 2011-03-06 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oneandthetruth.livejournal.com
Not only that, but the hero's dying, getting advice from his mentor in the afterlife, then coming back to life to win the battle isn't even original. Rowling ripped it off from the novel The Darkest Hour, by Erin Hunter, published in 2004.

Date: 2011-03-06 05:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oneandthetruth.livejournal.com
Where can I read it?! (The Darkest Hour, that is. :)

You should be able to find it in the children's section of any public library. It's part of the hugely-popular Warrriors series about feral cats. The first six books comprise the first story arc and are: Into the Wild, Fire and Ice, Forest of Secrets, Rising Storm, A Dangerous Path, and The Darkest Hour. They follow the same story arc as the HP books but are SO much better! They're what HP should have been (which is the name of an essay I'm working on, BTW). Compare Fireheart to Harry, Bluestar to Dumbledore, and Tigerclaw to Voldemort, just for starters. But if you have a weak stomach, you might want to have a barf bag ready when you do that. If you think HP sucks now, I guarantee it'll look infinitely worse after you read the Fireheart Warriors series.

Date: 2011-03-08 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oneandthetruth.livejournal.com
I just mean it's positively nauseating how huge the gap in quality is between HP and Warriors. And the thing is, Warriors isn't great literature. The books are wonderful entertainment IMO, but their style is workmanlike, and the characters and situations are nothing you haven't seen before, if you're an adult. Nonetheless, the stories are tightly-plotted and exciting (each book is only about 315 pages long), the good characters are lovble and respect-worthy, the bad ones are fiendishly brilliant, the world-building is carefully thought out (there are even rule books for how the Warriorverse works), and the morality is consistent and ennobling. Even though these books aren't great art, they're just so much better in every way than the Potter books, that it's disgusting to see how much more acclaim and sales HP gets than Warriors. The illustrations are better, too. Wayne McLoughlin's artwork for the American editions is just gorgeous. The website even has a screen saver of his work you can download. I've included the link for the official site. Be sure to have the sound on your computer turned on when you go there so you can hear the cats yowling. http://warriorcats.com/

Date: 2011-03-06 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charlottehywd.livejournal.com
Really? Wow... I thought she was above plagiarism...

Date: 2011-03-06 04:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary-j-59.livejournal.com
Um - really? I would like to point you to my (alas, terribly long!) essay, "The Mores of the 19th century". Before I wrote it, someone else had pointed out how very much Harry was like Oliver Twist. And others have pointed out the strong similarities between the Potter books and The Worst Witch, and also Eva Ibbotson's work and Neil Gaiman's.

You're joking, right?

Not that any of the above is deliberate plagiarism. But she had lots of influences and flung them together, IMHO, in a rather haphazard way-

Rowling and the Mores of the 19th century-

Date: 2011-03-06 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary-j-59.livejournal.com
You certainly can! Here is the link (sorry I haven't yet figured out how to prettify links):
http://mary-j-59.livejournal.com/28732.html#cutid1

Re: Rowling and the Mores of the 19th century-

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Date: 2011-03-07 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charlottehywd.livejournal.com
Except Oliver Twist was actually likable and didn't get handed stuff just because he was special. (I choose to ignore the tacked on ending explaining Oliver's true birth because it cheapens the story, I think.)

Date: 2011-03-08 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oneandthetruth.livejournal.com
Rowling also blatantly copied Snape off Sherlock Holmes. Almost a year ago on Snapedom, I came up with a list of literally dozens of ways the two are alike, and I didn't even mention all of them. In the interest of saving space, I only hit the highlights. I've included the link if you want to read what I said. Just scroll down to the end of the main essay I'm replying to to see my remarks. http://asylums.insanejournal.com/snapedom/262649.html?thread=2076665#t2076665

Date: 2011-03-08 01:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charlottehywd.livejournal.com
Wow, I never would have caught that! How interesting!
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Date: 2011-03-08 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oneandthetruth.livejournal.com
Please see mary_j_59's remarks in this thread as well as my own. I also thought of something else Rowling ripped off from Warriors. Many people have remarked how weird it is that Dumbledore didn't just fall when Snape AK'd him; he lifted up and flew off the tower, unlike anyone else in the series killed by that spell. In the penultimate book of the Fireheart series, A Dangerous Path, someone dies in an almost identical way. I don't want to say more and spoil it for you, but the similarities between the two scenes are astonishing--and rather suspicious, under the circumstances.

Let me not forget to mention that Bluestar has a mysterious, secret past that's very similar to Dumbledore's, involving forbidden love, betrayal, and the death of an innocent. Honestly, Rowling reminds me less of an author than she does those "musical artists" who do nothing but rip off "sample" other people's music instead of writing something original.
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