I'll leave the in-depth commentary to the professionals, but here are my impressions of the first two chapters:
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Yeah, it's hard to snark on Chapter 2, what with it being arguably the best chapter in the book. I suppose someone who doesn't like Snape, or always believed him to be evil ('cause he picks on Harry), might have more snark for this part, to the tune of "Thanks for saying what was obvious from the start, Jo. Now everyone can focus on the ship wars in 'peace'."
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Yeah, it's hard to snark on Chapter 2, what with it being arguably the best chapter in the book. I suppose someone who doesn't like Snape, or always believed him to be evil ('cause he picks on Harry), might have more snark for this part, to the tune of "Thanks for saying what was obvious from the start, Jo. Now everyone can focus on the ship wars in 'peace'."