And we know potions can induce other emotions, like calmness, euphoria, or romantic obsession, so who knows what that green potion can do.
Gah. I mean, I know writing is hard and it's hard to keep track of all these things... but that scene is one of many good reminders from this series that if too much of readers' understanding of characters and events is supported by nothing but one character's random guess, it's time to go back and give those things more foundation in revisions.
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Date: 2021-06-12 08:28 pm (UTC)Gah. I mean, I know writing is hard and it's hard to keep track of all these things... but that scene is one of many good reminders from this series that if too much of readers' understanding of characters and events is supported by nothing but one character's random guess, it's time to go back and give those things more foundation in revisions.