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deathtocapslock* Ooh, we’re half-way through the book! :)
* Lockhart’s looking “excited and important”, which is the sort of description usually reserved for Percy. Is this foreshadowing for Percy’s evilness in OOTP?
* I like the idea of Picture!Lockharts curling their hair so much that I won’t bother asking where they got the rollers from or why they needed them.
* I wonder why Snape’s trying not to smile. He doesn’t seem to have any particular grudge against Filch – in fact, he’d probably sympathise with him as a fellow outcast – so maybe it’s Lockhart’s behaviour he finds amusing?
* Harry feels sorry for Filch, but “not nearly as sorry as he felt for himself”, continuing the long tradition of self-pity in these books.
* Love Lockhart’s backtracking here, BTW. “Ah! I thought so!”
* Filch seems to be ashamed of the fact that he’s a Squib, whereas Hermione’s never been ashamed of her Mudblood status (and nor, as far as we know, have any Muggleborns), suggesting that Squibs have lower status than Muggleborns. Insulting people for being Squibs is still worse than insulting them for being Muggleborns, though.
* Harry’s sure that nothing Snape has to say will do him any good. Even though Snape’s spent most of last year saving Harry’s life.
* Snape’s logic may be leading him to the wrong conclusion, but at least he’s using logic, which is more than we can say for most characters in the books.
* Contrary to what Professor McGonagall says, there is evidence that Harry’s done something wrong. It may be circumstantial evidence, but it’s evidence nonetheless.
* So is Dumbledore reading Harry’s mind here? Because I have to say that the idea of the epitome of goodness going around violating people’s privacy like that seems a bit disturbing.
* “Hearing voices no-one else can hear isn’t a good sign, even in the wizarding world.” Erm, how do you know, Ron? This is, after all, a world with time travel, teleportation and transfiguration. For all you know, there might be some obscure bit of magic that only allows certain people to hear a sound.
* Ron’s laughing at Filch being a Squib, thereby teaching readers the value of tolerance.
* Ron seems happy that Filch is a Squib because Filch is such a bitter jerk. Apparently it doesn’t occur to him that Filch is such a bitter jerk because he’s a Squib, and that, if he were a normal wizard, he might be quite a nice person.
* No, Harry, Snape hasn’t tried to frame you for anything; he’s merely made a reasonable (if incorrect) deduction from the evidence available to him.
* I hope that at least one of the teachers tried to “Sourgify” the writing away before setting Filch on it with the mess remover.
* Aww, Filch’s portrayal here is so sad. :’(
* Ron doesn’t think Ginny should worry about Mrs. Norris being petrified, because she’s not very nice. Remember, kids, it’s OK for someone to be attacked if they annoy you in some way!
* As per usual, Ron’s is a few inches shorter than everyone else’s.
* Someone should tell Hermione that writing far more than you’re meant to is not a sign of intelligence. Learning to write briefly/choose only the most important points to include is a valuable skill to learn. If I’d handed in an essay that was ¼ over the word limit, my teachers would not have been happy.
* Hey, Hermione’s refusing to help Ron cheat with his homework. Maybe she should do this more often; he might actually learn something then.
* I don’t know what subject it was that JKR used to teach, but I’d be willing to bet it wasn’t History.
* So why is Dumbledore letting Binns teach? Hogwarts is, after all, the only wizard school in Britain; for DD to hire a bad teacher is, therefore, even worse than for a normal headmaster to hire one. He could well be putting literally every single wizarding child off studying history for life.
* Or maybe it’s just a cunning plan to stop them from investigating his own rather… interesting childhood.
* It seems that mediaeval wizarding society was so advanced, they all had surnames several centuries before they were introduced into Muggle society.
* I can’t help but wonder how Gryffindor and Slytherin managed to work together for so long; who to admit is, after all, a pretty fundamental disagreement. Perhaps Slytherin was initially OK with the idea of accepting Muggleborns, but them something happened (maybe one of them tried to betray the school?) that changed his mind.
* No, Ron, no-one’s said anything about Slytherin starting all this Pureblood stuff, simply that he agreed with it. There’s no evidence that this was a particularly rare view back in the tenth century.
* Also, in his haste to condemn Salazar as a “twisted old loony”, Ron seems not to have considered what it would say about Godric Gryffindor if he’d decided to start a school with such a man.
* Plus, of course, wishing to exclude Muggleborns is quite reasonable in an age when Muggles will literally kill you if they ever find out you’re a wizard.
* Maybe that explains all the Pureblood supremacy stuff: back in the old days, when Muggles were out to get magical people, wizards with Muggle relatives could well have divided loyalties, and so would naturally be seen as potential fifth columnists. The most trustworthy wizards would, therefore, be the ones with no Muggle relatives, and who would consequently be loyal only to the wizarding world. By the time Muggles stopped persecuting wizards and the danger of betrayal went away, the whole “Pureblood = best” thing was so heavily ingrained in wizarding culture that it is still present today.
* Considering Ron’s condescending attitude towards Muggles, I’d be a bit more cautious about getting on my high horse if I were him. He’s really a bit like a BNP member criticising a Nazi for being a racist.
* Am I the only one for whom “I wouldn’t be in his House if you paid me. Honestly, if the Sorting Hat had tried to put me in Slytherin, I’d’ve got the train straight back home…” brought flashbacks to “Imagine being in Hufflepuff. I think I’d leave, don’t you?”
* The sad thing is, all this “You could have been great in Slytherin” stuff could have been an excellent opportunity to show that “Slytherin” and “evil” are not synonymous. As it is, though, it comes across as a moral test that Harry has passed. The sign of true goodness = hating Slytherin House.
* Hermione’s really got a high opinion of old Dumbles, hasn’t he? Dumbledore couldn’t cure Mrs. Norris, ergo Mrs. Norris’ attacker can’t be human. What was it I said about elementary logic and the Hogwarts curriculum?
* Nice to see that Fred was already showing strong bullying tendencies by the age of five. And a remarkable control of magic, too, if he was able to turn a teddy bear into a spider without any training or a wand. Remind you of anyone?
* Hermione’s laughing at Ron’s obvious trauma, which, given what we now know about JKR’s views on love, is probably meant to be A Clue for their eventual marriage.
* So Hogwarts can buy golden plates for all its pupils, but not keep its toilets in good order. Clearly, Dumbledore’s been diverting funds from the sanitation department into the crockery-buying department.
* Percy’s noticed how upset Ginny is, whereas neither Ron, Harry nor Hermione have. Remember this when she tells everybody about Percy’s girlfriend.
* “You don’t care about Ginny,” says Ron, even though all the evidence in the books points to him being the only one of his family who actually cares about her.
* Given the rudeness of Ron’s remark, five points from Gryffindor is quite a mild punishment.
* Gosh, the Percy-hate’s really coming strong here, isn’t it? Now the trio are reluctant to even sit near him in the common room.
* “‘Let’s think,’ said Ron in mock puzzlement. ‘Who do we know who thinks Muggle-borns are scum?’” The correct answer is “No-one, because JKR can’t write a convincing racist.”
* It’s a bit like if, when Harper Lee wrote To Kill a Mockingbird, Tom Robinson, instead of being a poor labourer, was a respected teacher or something like that. And instead of framing him for rape, Bob Ewell had called him a “nigger”. And instead of doing this pretty much every time he met him, Bob had used this insult maybe one or two times a year. And instead of doing this to every black person he met, Bob only insulted Tom. And if instead of being motivated by blind prejudice, Bob had a perfectly understandable reason for disliking him. And instead of agreeing with Bob’s insults, everyone just ignored him. And instead of being poor and oppressed, Maycomb’s black population were well-integrated and treated as equals with the town’s white people. And instead of being a common insult, “nigger” was rare enough that Tom had to ask one of his friends what it meant. And then the audience are expected to react as if Bob’s an evil bigot making Tom’s life hell, instead of just a minor irritant which any reasonably well-balanced person would ignore.
* Even if we accept for argument’s sake that Draco is a racist, that still isn’t very good evidence for him being Slytherin’s heir. There are, after all, lots of racists in the world; and besides, there’s always the possibility that Slytherin Jnr. would be hiding his racism so as not to draw suspicion on himself.
* Oh, wait, silly me, that’s not the only evidence Ron has. Draco’s also ugly. Because ugliness is a sure sign of badness, obviously.
* Oh, and his father’s “evil” (bear in mind that, so far, about the worst he’s done is insult Mr. Weasley, which is unpleasant, certainly, but not evil). Because Slytherin was so evil, all his descendants would be, too.
* Not that blood’s important in any way, or anything like that.
* And upon this foundation of spurious conjecture, Ron goes on to build a whole edifice of even more spurious conjecture, suggesting that the Malfoys have been handing the key down, father to son, throughout the centuries.
* Yeah Ron, try presenting that evidence in court, and see how far it gets you.
* And by “court”, I mean a proper Muggle one with juries and presumptions of innocence and all the various other safeguards designed to prevent wrongful imprisonment, not one of the kangaroo courts that pass for justice in the wizarding world.
* It is, as Hermione says, “possible”. But, in the absence of any other evidence, it’s no more possible than any of the other thousands of possibilities. (Hey, perhaps it’s Lockhart, and that idiot façade is just a way to throw suspicion. Or perhaps it’s one of the other rich, Pureblood children whose ancestors have all been in Slytherin. Or perhaps the whole thing’s just a practical joke by Fred and George…)
* Ron and Hermione seem to be getting irritated at each other remarkably quickly. Cue Can You Feel the Love in the background.
* “But that’s impossible,” says Harry, apparently forgetting that he’s a wizard in a school of magic in a society that has magic for just about everything, so asking Draco questions without them realising who they are shouldn’t be impossible.
* A lot of people think that Malfoy would be unable to keep his mouth shut if he was the heir, but I disagree. He doesn’t tell anyone about Norbert in PS, after all, and in OOTP he doesn’t seem to blab about Harry’s “remedial Potions” lessons. He’s quite capable of keeping secrets when the plot requires it he wants to.
* “‘Oh come on, no teacher’s going to fall for that,’ said Ron. ‘They’d have to be really thick…’” Can you guess who it is yet? :)
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Date: 2010-11-11 04:43 pm (UTC)Maybe the dragon might have grabbed it as it started to fly? Or, since the point of the challenge was to get past the dragon, it may have been protected from that sort of spell, but were that the case, it would have been nice had someone mentioned that.
And yeah, the fact that it's all in Latin is bizarre. What about Greek? Or Chinese? Or any other ancient language? If she'd developed her own magical language, it'd've been fine, but what tunnel vision she has to use Latin and ONLY Latin
Well, Avada Kedavra is based on Hebrew, and Langlock and Muffliato seem to be a mixture of Latin and English, so maybe more modern spells are based on their creator's language, whereas before the Roman Empire, the only thing wizards could do was kill people. Which might explain "Thou shalt not suffer a witch to live", I suppose.
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Date: 2010-11-11 09:11 pm (UTC)Actually, the word that was translated in the KJV of the Bible as "witch", is a word that is the root word for "pharmacist". IOW, the original text from thousands of years ago is discussing someone who brewed potions and medicines, which back in those days could be a witch, or could just as likely be a doctor.
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Date: 2010-11-12 01:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-12 01:16 am (UTC)So basically Rowling's whole body of work is AU...which should warm the cockles of every AU Potterverse fanfic writer's heart! LOL
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Date: 2010-11-12 04:09 am (UTC)Well you know what my fic is about, filling the giant potholes or...should I say Weaving? But at somepoint any fanfic writer is working with a non-workable canon. There are some things that are never going to add up, or work logically or even meet a minimal realistic reality.
I just don't believe JKR ever sat down and really mapped out anything other than the basics of Harry's story (or at least not like she claims she did)
Like a while back when I wanted to create a Hogwarts scheduel for the professors and school itself.
Now, places like the HP Lexicon and stuff have developed Harry his own daily class scheduel from information filtered from the books.
But for fanfic purposes I had wanted to develope an actual working week for all the professors, classes, 1-7 years of students. Just so I'd know where each year class, house was and what day's a professor is where and teaching what year, etc. etc.
I even had one of my fanfic readers try to help me because he told me he was a math professor and it was in his field to create that kind of thing from data and information.
Needless to say it was impossible to do using canon info on when certain classes were taking place. You can get out of Canon Harry thinking about a class thats happening at a certain time of day. There is a lot of that in the book. There was even places where Harry is giving the reader info on when other students are taking classes. So, places like the lexicon were able to develope harry's schedule for a year; when classes were on what day and time.
But see that is because JKR was focused on Harry - I very seriously doubt if she sat down once and figured out how to make her school actually work.
With the number of Professors, required classes, 1-7 Years (which don't forget are split into 2 so that actually means 14) Then don't forget to add the elective classes 3rd year and up and don't forget to take away some classes and add others after 6th.
Lets just say if you use the bits of canon info on when Harry is taking classes and try to compile it into a working schedule for the actual school...NADA...not gonna happen. You can't fit all those teachers and all those students and years into or around where canon has Harry, etc.
I nor my reader were able to create a workable schedule, at some point my reader said that either they have to have more professors teaching the subject or they're getting 7th year students to teach.
I don't even know if it's possible if you totally forget canon info and attempt it but needless to say it just made me realize all the more that JKR wasn't really focusing on 'really' making her world correct.
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Date: 2010-11-12 05:54 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-12 01:41 pm (UTC)I wouldn't mind taking a look at it but I don't know for sure if I'll understand it =)
Do you have all the classes/ 1-7 year and all the Professors on yours?
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Date: 2010-11-12 01:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-12 02:05 pm (UTC)10 or 8 for each elective. (Care of Magical Creatures starts in the 2nd year. And I added Geography which for me starts in 2nd year too.)
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Date: 2010-11-12 01:59 pm (UTC)Maybe you won´t understand some additional info, but you can recognize the class from the name of the Professor.
The most terrible part was to ensure that the combination of the Houses were distributed evenly. And a free half-day for every Professor. And library-duties (two hours/week for every Prof).
In the end, it makes 32 hours per week for obligatory classes, 20 hours per week for electives (for Profs); for the students from 28 hours/week in the firts year through max. 46 hours/week right before OWLs (for the know-it-alls who want to attend everything - and it is possible without a Time-turner) to min. 16 hours/week for the last two years.
20 h/w for a Prof is normal, 32 is living hell (in reality), but still.
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Date: 2010-11-12 02:43 pm (UTC)Re: post i!
Date: 2010-11-12 03:00 pm (UTC)Is there any possibility to post .doc or maybe .pdf to livejournal?
Because I really wouldn´t like to write the code for this. :-))