PoA Chapter Five

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Harry’s woken the next morning by Tom and a cup of tea. Harry really does get to live the life of a Victorian gentleman, doesn’t he? What innkeeper in the Muggle world wakes customers with a cup of tea?

Percy’s still with Penelope here. Are we supposed to assume they got married and had boring babies in the epilogue?

Mrs. Weasley is telling Hermione and Ginny about a love potion she made when she was younger and they’re all very giggly. Because there’s never anything for girls to talk about with each other ever besides guys.

And by “talking about guys” I of course mean plotting and scheming for how to catch them, because that’s how true love works. Girls just have to wait around for a chance to conk a clueless male of the species on the head and drag him off to her cave by his hair. Where he’ll be in charge after that.

This year we’ll all be chauffeured to school by a guy in green velvet. Yup, you won’t find service like this in the Muggle world.

To Ron’s disgust, Percy gets into the car with the Trio. Wow, the Percy hate in this chapter is strong. As far as I can tell the only reason for it is to set up Percy being a terrible bad guy for two books, but all he’s done so far is be stiff. Oh, and accuse Ron of intentionally sabotaging his stuff. Can’t imagine where he’d get the idea that his brothers would ever sabotage his stuff, can you?

The ride is uneventful, but Harry makes sure to notice that the old-fashioned Ministry cars are better than Uncle Vernon’s company car. Muggles suck so bad.

The Wizard car is like the Firebolt to Vernon’s Nimbus 2001.

The chauffeurs touch their hats in salute to Mr. Weasley before leaving. Somebody could do a really interesting paper on the Weasleys, class and money.

Ginny catches Harry’s eye and they both laugh at Percy’s showing off for his girlfriend. It seems like Ginny’s just showing her personality to be basically good natured and finding amusement in her funny family. Looking back perhaps this is a sign of Ginny’s awesome true personality that entirely consists of mocking others. SOULMATES!

Let’s take a moment to reflect on our two central canon couples. One demonstrates true love by the way they act like they can’t stand each other, the other bonds over how superior they are to everyone else. That’s how we know which ones are the sidekicks. The one couple insults each other; the other insults everyone else.

Mrs. Weasley kisses everyone and gives Harry and extra long hug. Which makes Harry embarrassed but pleased. I’m sure I found that sweet for Harry the first time I read this.

Harry says he’s not scared of Sirius since he couldn’t be any worse than Voldemort. Actually Harry, almost anyone would be worse than Voldemort as Voldemort’s an idiot.

Heh. Wouldn’t it be great to see Harry wind up in the Muggle world in trouble? Like, facing some low-level thug from The Sopranos or The Wire or the bad guy from any episode of White Collar or Leverage or even Law & Order. He’d be all, “Well, I know I can handle myself. They can’t be worse than Voldemort.” And then he’d be robbed, framed for murder or dead.

Before putting Harry on the train Arthur is sure to plant the idea in his head that maybe he ought to be looking for Sirius. He is a Gryffindor, after all.

That Arthur knows Harry has a reason to want Sirius dead just makes me wonder once again why that story wouldn’t be all over the papers.

It’s another example of how somehow a society that’s exceptionally small and intimate manages to be exceptionally unacquainted.

Ginny again shows a personality in telling Ron, “Oh, that’s nice!” at being told to go away. The personality I liked, I mean. Not the one from later books.

Neither Harry nor Hermione are apologetic about Ron’s very rude dismissal of his sister. Maybe if you all had treated the first Ginny nicer we wouldn’t have been subjected to the improved version!

The kids find Lupin sleeping in the compartment, looking worn and grey. Let’s not wake him up right away. Let us enjoy him while he’s still a cool character!

Okay, so why does the guy have a battered case that has his name on it, calling himself a professor, exactly? It seems obvious JKR’s setting him up to be the excellent teacher stereotype, only it doesn’t actually seem like Lupin’s a teacher except for this year.

Azkaban is also a much cooler place in this chapter than it ever is again.

Hermione reminds us the Muggles are out looking for Black too. They’d probably catch him a lot more quickly than Wizards with the right information.

Ron apologizes for his cheap Sneakoscope, which went wild as he was tying it to Errol’s leg. Because Scabbers was there. Get it? Only they chalk it up to Ron using Errol when he wasn’t supposed to. So basically the Sneakoscope is another one of those objects that seems useful but is actually completely useless, like the Weasley’s clock.

Hogsmeade is the only entirely non-Muggle settlement in Britain. Because Muggles are awesome!

And to prove my point, the best thing in Hogsmeade is a candy shop. Look, I love candy as much as the next person, but there’s plenty of them all over the Muggle world. Maybe they don’t carry candy that physically injures you, but I consider that a plus.

Also, Ron, you’re 13.

The Shrieking Shack is the most “severely” haunted building in Britain. I like that it’s not really that it’s the best haunting, it’s just the most severe since yelling comes from it.

Harry and Draco have been enemies since they met on the train to Hogwarts. Um, they met before that. But I guess Draco didn’t know they were enemies until the train.

Crabbe and Goyle seem to exist to do Draco’s bidding. Unlike, say, Hermione and Ron who exist to do Harry’s thinking and laundry and make Harry look good by comparison, respectively. They don’t have to do Harry’s bidding, they just get yelled at and shamed if they don’t.

Not quite sure what the point of Draco’s entrance was there, except to introduce him to the story, I guess. The scene just made everyone look a bit silly, really.

The train stops to let on Dementors, and the rest of the cast conveniently stumbles into the car. Now we’ve re-met everyone, can we get on with the story, please?

Harry faints at the sight of the Dementor, which he’ll pretend is embarrassing but really just shows he’s suffered more than anyone because his parents died heroically protecting him. Even if he has no way of remembering that whatsoever. Harry’s like Batman, in a way.

Ginny was shaking like mad because she, too, has met Voldemort. SOULMATES!

They have no chance to speak to Hagrid. So we dodge that bullet, at least.

McGonagall calls Hermione and Harry as soon as they get in. Harry’s not happy, as McGonagall always makes him feel like he’s done something wrong. Unless he’s just thrown a torture curse, in which case she makes him feel gallant!

Apparently Lupin’s carrying around chocolate for Dementors is early proof of what a great teacher he is.

Hermione leaves her meeting with McGonagall looking quite happy. Like, “given power over time itself” happy.

Luckily the meeting means they miss the Sorting. I sort of love the way JKR sets up all these things and then has to spend the rest of the series trying to find ways around having to write them again and again.

Okay, I spoke too soon about re-meeting everyone. One more person to meet. Dumbledore. Are we all here? Can we get on with it now?

Dumbledore is often described as the greatest wizard of the age, but that’s not why Harry respects him. He respects him because you can’t help but trust him. Yes, you just can’t help but trust him even when he’s dead and even though his plans are completely stupid and nonsensical and by all rights should have gotten you all killed.

Seriously, Harry, that’s not a good reason to respect someone. That just means they’re good at manipulating people.

The candlelight shimmers on Dumbledore’s beard. Ew. That makes it sound like his beard’s greasy or sticky or something. Beards should not shimmer ever.

Damn. One more person. Snape. Snape’s here too, looking less shabby than Lupin. Now we’re all here.

Next to him we meet our new teacher, Hagrid. And he’s already crying and wiping his eyes on the table. I hate this guy.

The Trio knows how much being made a teacher would mean to Hagrid, what with him not really doing anything to qualify for such a job besides being a friend of Dumbledore’s and never indicating any talent or desire for the job. Yup, this appointment is a real triumph for…trusting Dumbledore.

Harry feels he’s home at last, in the dorm. And it only took him 60 pages to get there. Compared to the books that are to follow, that’s pretty speedy.

I have to say after these chapters, nobody in this book seems 13.

Things happening twice:
Harry and Draco becoming enemies on the train to Hogwarts—just like James and Snape.
First use of a Patronus so we see it before Harry uses it. Though we don’t actually ever see what Lupin’s Patronus is.
I believe one of the first mentions of love potions.
Grrr! Percy is already so awful he's clearly evil! Clearly! Evil!
Harry and Ginny bonding over other peoples’ flaws: SOULMATES!
Remember how Vernon got a company car earlier? Now Arthur’s got a better one!
Again the Sneakoscope goes off, making for the third time we’ve heard of it.


It’s a gun. No it isn’t! It’s Chekov! No it isn’t!

Percy totally seems like a bad guy, doesn’t he? Look at how all the good people dislike him.
Status: Fired, I guess. Percy’s got to be some sort of lesson in not being completely loyal to Harry or something. Or maybe he was just supposed to be some genuine family drama, even if he really wasn’t.

What’s that thing that came out of Lupin’s wand?
Status: Fired. That’d be the main spell we’ll be learning in this book.




Designated Hero
Dumbledore’s set up as this awesome headmaster here, but he’s really already just showing favoritism.

Misdirected Answering
Funny how when Harry tells his friends that Arthur told him not to go looking for Black none of them, including Thinking-Brain-Dog Hermione, wondered what Black obviously has or had done to make Harry go looking for him.

Don’t worry, if Lupin wakes up and he’s hungry he can go to the front of the train to get food from the trolley lady. Phew! Glad that’s cleared up, it was really distracting.

Nut o’ Fun
What’s with that briefcase, Lupin? It’s not like you’ve been teaching long enough to have a battered case. In fact, why do you have any case at all?

Jabootu Score: 4

Comments

[tdotm.livejournal.com]

---“Harry’s woken the next morning by Tom and a cup of tea. Harry really does get to live the life of a Victorian gentleman, doesn’t he? What innkeeper in the Muggle world wakes customers with a cup of tea?”

Actually, I’ve stayed at the odd small establishment that has done just that – and I’ve NEVER become the saviour of my world, simply by standing still whilst a powerful megalomaniac learnt about the ancient magic of love the hard way ....

---“Harry says he’s not scared of Sirius since he couldn’t be any worse than Voldemort. Actually Harry, almost anyone would be worse than Voldemort as Voldemort’s an idiot.”

Ah – the good old days of PoA, when the threat of the return of Voldemort was far more frightening than the reality turned out to be, especially in DH. JKR should have taken the advice Walter Bagehot offered the British Royal Family. ”We must not let daylight in upon the magic” in other words, maintain that air of mystery and the unknown. Sadly, rather than keep him hidden in the shadows and only wheeling him out for brief confrontations, she thoroughly exposed him. Even worse, via Harry’s Voldiecam we frequently saw exactly what he was thinking – and it wasn’t good. The lack of mystery meant no fear or apprehension – especially as he turned out to be a right useless w*nker.

---“Neither Harry nor Hermione are apologetic about Ron’s very rude dismissal of his sister. Maybe if you all had treated the first Ginny nicer we wouldn’t have been subjected to the improved version!”

I think she sounded a little brattish, understandable in the only girl *and* the youngest, but maybe a prelude to the horrors to come. Also, if Ginny had been drained slowly and painfully of life by Tom Riddle in CoS, *before* she could be saved, that would also have ensured we didn’t get that hideous jock/cheerleader combined of HBP...

---“Ginny was shaking like mad because she, too, has met Voldemort. SOULMATES!”

If JKR had played on this more, it’d have been totally convincing. After Christmas in OotP, I don’t remember it mattering again. Instead, Luna was convincingly given the understanding outsider role that would surely be catnip to someone like Harry.

---“Seriously, Harry, that’s not a good reason to respect someone. That just means they’re good at manipulating people.”

This could have been dealt with so well. The series follows a character from childhood to young adulthood. A child *would* see a manipulative old git as someone strong and trustworthy, even as adult outsiders (us!) knew that the reason he always knew what was going on, was because he was the one manipulating events around him. It would have been interesting to see a gradual understanding on Harry’s part due to HIM changing – Dumbledore never does. Harry the man would surely see everything differently than Harry the child and child readers would gradually realise the same thing along with him. Sadly Harry’s doubt was abrupt and limited to the Tent. He didn’t even resolve his feelings, he just seemed to forget them. Albus Severus my arse.

[sistermagpie.livejournal.com]

Harry totally forgot his feelings. It was the weirdest thing. Especially with Snape. The guy was the prime antagonist throughout the series, the one guy who always surprised him and challenged whatever he was thinking at the time. We knew he had a past that encompassed the worst in Harry's background. HBP leaves Harry with every reason to want to kill him. JKR even says it's "personal" now (okay, that was a bit silly since it was always personal).

And then suddenly in DH Snape's like just some random guy. If you only read that one book you'd never know Harry had strong feelings about him. He just finds out that oh, Snape was on our side because he had a thing about my mother. There's no moment where this even has to sink in. He just starts announcing Snape as one of his players as part of the big thing. Then years later he's named his kid after him, completely disregarding the fact that Snape actually did hate his guts and show it every day he knew Harry, and Harry hated him back. I get ultimately forgiving the guy and respecting what he did, but you have to fanwank what exactly the gesture was supposed to mean in light of their actual relationship.

[night-axe.livejournal.com]

Their hate of each other may not be equivalent. I mean, Snape seems to have hated Harry for his personality, which is not as different from James as people like to believe. But Harry hated Snape mainly for acting like he was an enemy. If he'd been exactly the same person, only approving of the Trio and hostile to Draco, I think Harry would have enjoyed the hell out of Snape's vicious streak. So although it's a huge failing of the books to leave their relationship without a resolution, it's kind of IC for Harry as a character to be all, Snape was on my side? Yay Snape! Especially after the man's dead. If he had to deal with Snape still alive and hostile it'd have been another, and better, story.

Naming his son "Severus" is the other way round. It works better thematically, as in the hero giving his secret ally the ultimate accolade and proclaiming him a good guy for all time. On the personal level, Harry giving his son the name of his once-hated chemistry teacher seems iffy. (Though slightly less iffy, to me, than also honoring the man who planned to kill him.)

[sunnyskywalker]

I could imagine a person realizing they'd judged someone unfairly after they died, reevaluating previous actions and deciding the guy had it rough and did his best and got insults in return, and gradually forgetting just how much he used to hate him. Then he'd name his kid after him as a sort of apology/symbolic second chance.

But I say "a person," not "Harry," because Harry has the emotional range of a teaspoon. I don't know what he was thinking other than "JKR thought it would be touching!"